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minus-squareblindsight@beehaw.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·4 days agongl, that’s a pretty good persuasive essay. Since the OP gave the prompt, it also took creative risks with an essay topic that is original, and doesn’t just parrot the consensus opinion on a well-trodden topic. I’d give this a really good grade up to grade 11.
minus-squaresp3ctr4l@lemmy.dbzer0.comlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up1·3 days agoDear god I hope you aren’t a teacher, I was writing better than this in middle school.
ngl, that’s a pretty good persuasive essay. Since the OP gave the prompt, it also took creative risks with an essay topic that is original, and doesn’t just parrot the consensus opinion on a well-trodden topic.
I’d give this a really good grade up to grade 11.
Dear god I hope you aren’t a teacher, I was writing better than this in middle school.