cm0002@lemmy.world to Funny@sh.itjust.works · 2 months agoThe Millennial Work Anthemlemmy.mlimagemessage-square17linkfedilinkarrow-up11arrow-down10cross-posted to: [email protected]
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minus-squareagamemnonymous@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up0·2 months agoAesthetically, I don’t like ABBB for “Roses are red…”. ABCB is fine, ABBB feels too forceful. And the plurals just turn it into half rhymes anyway. How about : Roses are red I used to have dreams Work is a drag But I guess I have memes
minus-squareisolatedscotch@discuss.tchncs.delinkfedilinkarrow-up0·2 months agonow it’s just missing an ACAB rhyme scheme
Aesthetically, I don’t like ABBB for “Roses are red…”. ABCB is fine, ABBB feels too forceful. And the plurals just turn it into half rhymes anyway. How about :
Roses are red
I used to have dreams
Work is a drag
But I guess I have memes
now it’s just missing an ACAB rhyme scheme